Saturday, March 5, 2016

My Last Slice of Life ShortStoriesCritique

I sat at the table my mouth a waterfall of saliva as I stared down the meat lovers pizza it was three days old and smelled of refrigerator. It was cold but i didn’t care cold was how I liked it the cheese firm and sauce sweet truly how pizza was meant to be eaten.

My hand shook with anticipation as I reach to grab the pizza by it’s cold hard crust. Feeling my fingers sliding under the slice rubbing up against the smooth under crust I lifted the slice slowly taking care not to drop a single topping.

I opened my mouth slowly moving the tip of the slice into my mouth. My jaws react biting down but before I can the sound of breaking glass coming from the window to my left interrupts me looking to my left I am stunned by what I see. The window to my left was shattered broken glass and pieces of frame lay scattered all across my kitchen floor but standing in the center of it all was a man in a black skin tight latex full body suit.

He stood there for a second staring off at the wall ahead of him. This confused me as I has no idea how he could see as the suit had no eyes. I sat at the table pondering this for a moment but suddenly with a loud rubbery squelch he turned his head towards my direction his eyeless face sending a cold shiver down my spine.

Calming myself down a bit I decide to speak perhaps I could find out what he wanted and get him to leave.

“Umm can I help you si-” I began to speak but I was interrupted by a latex covered right hook to the face sending me flying out of my chair onto the floor. Shackley I rolled over onto my back to see the latex intruder grab my pizza off of the table and silently jump out the same window he came from.

I just laid there silently mourning the loss of my beloved meat lovers until finally I broke out into full blown sobbing then passed out.



Submitted March 06, 2016 at 11:37AM by HereticGoose http://ift.tt/1YhnSMj ShortStoriesCritique

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