[FEEDBACK] Mike Tyson Mysteries Spec Script (comedy, 12 pages) Screenwriting

My writing partner and I just finished our Mike Tyson Mysteries Spec and are looking for some feedback! Let us know what you think!

LOGLINE: When the refrigerator breaks Mike notices a mysterious light, meanwhile the rest of the team worries about Mikes concussion.

Mike Tyson Mysteries: "Then You Better Go Catch It!"

Submitted July 21, 2017 at 09:56PM by parakeet_paradise69 http://ift.tt/2txaYF2 Screenwriting